Austercita, ya veo ahora algunos cambios.
Tuve que introducir el párrafo donde decía que ganaba el que quedaba segundo por que los administradores de la BGG rechazaron un primer intento de subir el juego. Decian:
"We're sorry but we could not use your recent submission."
"Reason: More information is needed. Your submission has a lot of information on theme and background for the game, but comes up short on describing the actual game-play or goal. You note that the player who crosses the finish first is unlikely to be the winner, but it's not recognizable why that is from the submitted description. Please elaborate on the game-play and goal and re-submit."
Por eso añadí, de mi propia cosecha:
"So, the goal in this "chaotic" race is not to win, instead of that, the goal is to be the second in cross the goal-line."